A New Kitten
When I went to inter school for swimming, it was my sister's birthday so she had the day off. Esme and my mum came to watch me.After school when I got home I said to Esme “did you get anything?
"yes" said Esme.
I said is an animal?
Yes”said Esme.
it was a ginger kitten with light ginger stripes.
good work on this story but maybe next time you can make it more like a story
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